Her Triplet Alphas（Book 1) (2024)

DNF
The storyline could have been really good but the writing is sloppy and a little immature. Some parts were unnecessary and others rushed. It needed a good proofreading. I just didn't feel it was worth the money the Dreame app wanted me to spend so I parted ways with it.

The book needed polishing and editing for misspellings, as the story does in the Dreame app. I like the characters and the steamy parts, but the book completely changes pace after the first half, which makes the story interesting too, but it’s like reading a totally different book.

3.5
Better than I expected. Honestly. VERY spicy. But the story line is pretty good too. Not bad for a book I found on an app thru an ad on Facebook.

This was arguably one of the worst books I have ever read. There were so many typos and poorly structured sentences that the editor either quit halfway through or Helen Keller herself came back from the dead to proofread. Not to mention that all the characters essentially had the same name, especially if they were related in any way whatsoever. The triplets all just repeated themselves. Charity was annoying. I could go on forever honestly. The story didn’t even get exciting until they stopped f*cking every chapter, but then it got drug out for so long I lost interest again, and couldn’t wait for it to end. This story would’ve been more interesting if it had been about 200 pages shorter or at the very least ended at chapter 50 where it seemed like it was wrapping everything up but then the author just decided to add the epilogue in with the story. All in all I would give negative stars if that were possible. Read at your own risk. I think I actually lost brain cells reading this.

"It's werewolf smut," was my reply whenever my husband or in-laws asked what I was reading while on vacation. This was my guilty beach read. If you are looking for sophisticated writing, keep browsing elsewhere. If you are distracted by actual physiological impossibilities & are likely to ask "Which orifice? Um....what? *How?!?*", then this is not the book for you. If you're looking for a page-turner of werewolf sex-filled fiction, then you're in the right place. I'll soon be reading Book 2 (same story, told from the triplets viewpoint).

A Facebook ad reeled me in, wasn't expecting to like this at all but once I started I went down a rabbit hole. Saw comments online that the book was incomplete but I went on YouTube and found the audio version and I've been listening to that which was great coz the actual book had so many typos and errors - didn’t seem like it had been edited. Oh well, Book 2 where you at? Need my alpha fix 🫣😮‍💨

I really wanted to give this book a chance but it felt like a gigantic run on sentence. Definitely needs editing and a lot of polishing. Had potential but just not yet.

SO i actually read ‘The Challenge, Two alphas One Girl’ and i never actually finished THIS series but i read 130 chapters of that book and couldn’t find it on goodreads and wasn’t about to miss out on a book so x
decided to dnf this actual book series bc it was spoilt by my other book x

These books are my guilty pleasure, so bad they’re they’re so good

2/5

I’m done with these stupids apps. This was the worst f*cking thing I’ve ever read.

I cannot get past how much I loved this book. The plot has so many twists and turns. The scenes in them even made me feel spicy over here. I was fully in a chokehold, finished this and immediately started the second from the POV of the triplets. I never was big with the whole “werewolf” stuff before, but now I am. I highly recommend giving it a shot!

I found this book thru a facebook ad, but didn’t want to pay to read the rest of it. It kept popping up on my feed so eventually I did some digging and I was able to find it on Wattpad! (I primarily read this on Wattpad, a couple chapters a night before bed and more chapters during weekends) I eventually found it as an actual physical book available to purchase on Amazon (although I didn’t purchase it)

Pros:
✍🏻The spice was there 🌶️ (the preview from the ad got me hooked so there’s that) - very detailed scenes
✍🏻Quick easy read - I could’ve finished this in a shorter amount of time, but with a busy schedule, a couple chapters a night had to do.
✍🏻Fantasy Romance (?) - Werewolves / supernatural

Cons:
✍🏻Typos / grammatical errors - I didn’t mind them too much since they could easily be figured out anyway, but mostly because I didn’t spend anything to read this book, so I wasn’t too bothered by the occasional writing error.

Overall, I enjoyed reading this.

Smut at its best

I got sucked into reading this because of a Facebook ad and it honestly made me not trust any other Facebook ads.

The writing is very childish. It reads like it was written by a 15 year old. I’ll put it this way, I’ve read more polished and mature SpongeBob fanfic. Literally, I’m not joking.

The sex isn’t good either. The positions make no sense. These boys would have to phase through each other for some of these positions. Physically they make no sense, so trying to imaging the spicy scenes is just like “huh…???”

For the amount of money you’d have to spend on this to read it on the app…. Don’t. There are plenty other well written werewolf sex books that you can read.

Did what I needed it to do until the 3/4 mark, then I got tired of it, very repetitive.

I can’t rate this more than 3 stars. While the overall plot was good there were tons of grammatical errors and a huge lack of world building. Being that the main characters were werewolves they hardly ever turned. I would read the second book because the concept is interesting.

I got sucked into the story from a FB ad not realizing I’d have to subscribe to finish the story. I was disappointed I had to pay so much more than a paperback or hardback book to finish the story, but I guess that’s the point of the sneak-peek FB ads. I am not a reader that can DNF a book once I’ve invested time in it. The writing definitely needed a great deal of editing for misspellings and grammatical errors. The story started with a good hook, but the rest of it felt rushed and underdeveloped. There was a lot of introspection into Chasity’s mind and life experiences in the first half, and the second half was missing that piece. As I said, the second half was rushed.

I was a bit disappointed with the amount of spelling mistakes and grammatical errors in this book.

This Book is the biggest sh*t what huh I read,what is the reason I say it ? The history is really simple, one cliche made history obviously, but the real problem is their protagonists, the Boys is the same stereotipic sh*t in the example of "Alpha male who treats his partner badly" they are supposed to lead A COMMUNITY, they cannot behave like teenagers, by the way "surprise" they cannot take responsibility for their actions, years of violence focused on a person who would continue like this if they had not been their partner, this brings me to another point, the protagonist is an idiot.

The author couldn't have written someone more basic and insufferable, right? She is just "oh I hate them because of the years of abuse, but they gave me a backpack and a cell phone and that's why I want to forgive them and have crazy sex" it can be more basic and insipid, it has no personality other than crying and then having sex, her story is "I have traumas and I hate them all, but not anymore because they gave me love and sex" Hugh

The parents are literally a forgettable character with the most trashy and cliché story ever, really the original Luna's pretext for hating her is someone immature and stupid, the alpha practically does not exist, the parents of the FL are the most badly thing written after the protagonist, "oh we are addicts, Let's forget that being addicts they are unstable and usually their children are born addicts because they can't stop using, let's forget that usually the law always seeks to ensure that children are left in the hands of relatives to prevent something from happening to the child", and so on.

Author, if you don't know how to write serious topics, DON'T WRITE IT AND NOW, it's really sad that the story has potential but it's garbage, well, what did I expect too?

I know there are many stories with these types of protagonists, but this one is actually even worse than all the previous ones.

I don't give it less than one star because there's no way.

I won't say more, it's tiring to talk about everything bad, anyway, don't read it, thank you

Like many others I was pulled in by a Facebook ad and had to find it elsewhere to continue reading. This book feels very rough and does not seem to have been touched by an editor. There were some interesting ideas, but the execution could have been better.

** Spoiler Alert **
The character names were unimaginative, lazy, and confusing. I understand wanting a theme for the triplets, as they’re, supposedly, made up of one soul, but every group of people had matching names. The supporting characters often seemed shallow and not well introduced to the reader.

Chasity has undergone serious trauma throughout her life, but quickly accepts the triplets as her mates and moves the relationship forward as fast as possible. Honestly, it felt unbelievable given they literally almost ended her in their childhood. The triplets, though they harassed Chasity for years, are immediately accepting and in love with her. No need to work through their change of feelings.

The smut scenes were a bit much and some positions seemed physically impossible. The story felt like it could have been broken up into multiple books because there was, both, too much and too little in one book.

Overall I enjoyed reading this book, I have never really read books before. I had always found it too hard or I was easily distracted. This is only the second book I had ever read. I didn't mind all of the spelling mistakes or grammatical errors as I am dyslexic and I haven't known any different. However I can see how it would bother others. There were a few times where a character's name was spelt differently or wrong, and I got confused thinking that yet another character had been added with another familiar name, but after rereading it was Clear what it meant.

I decided to read after seeing the Same ad on Facebook that I assume everyone saw but after reading a few chapters on one app realised I could read for free on wattpad. I enjoyed it a lot and I think I will continue to find similar story's to enjoy.

I very much enjoyed the amount of smut in this book and I think that it is what kept me hooked I hope to find more like It !

The book did feel rushed towards the end, but I like that it got wrapped up and not left on a cliffhanger for me to worry and wait to see what's next .

I read this story and DNF at about the halfway point when it was only on the dream app a few years ago. It was super rough then. Sentence structure was a mess, and I was constantly having to reread to understand. There were so many grammatical and spelling errors, and a handful of times I was lost, trying to figure out if it was a flashback or on the current timeline. I was not going to spend any more "coins" to unlock and read 80 something chapters.
Then, I found it on Amazon as a self-published paperback. It was my fault for figuring it had been fixed and edited, so I bought it, and YIKES. It's still the exact same story. Mistakes and all. I'm definitely returning it to Amazon.
The story is so bad. The idea behind it could be solid if it was executed correctly. The story reads so adolescent, and I'm annoyed with every single character. The main characters are supposed to be 23 and 18, but they read like they're all 14 and dating the way they think adults date. I definitely do not recommend this book.

Facebook got me invested by previewing the first several chapters, which led to me downloading the ‘Dreame’ app….and my inability to not finish a book once started made me preserve and continue to read the rest of this book.

The Werewolf smut gave me slight Twilight vibes. Overall, it needed to be proofread. There were A LOT of spelling and grammar errors. Some chapters were well written, and other chapters seemed rushed. There were chapters that were engaging and chapters that were pointless. It started off great and engaging, BUT by the middle/end it lost it's energy and just became stale.

I will NOT be reading nor paying for the sequel. 60 chapters were enough and I don't care enough about the characters to want to know more 🙃

Would have been higher if I could actually properly read the book. It was impossible to find a full copy of it unless you paid a ridiculous amount on Dreame or Wehear & other apps to read bits and pieces I found a copy on Amazon but it was only in paperback and didn't feel compelled to buy a copy when the author broke it up into so many books and it was just as much or more that way compared to the apps.. the writing was good and I was enjoying the story but the ridiculousness of trying to track down a way to read it was way to much.

This is my first werewolf romance book, and I kept seeing it advertised to me on Facebook, so I figured I’d give it a go. The spicy scenes were well-written and the writer’s strong suit. However, there were a lot of grammar errors throughout, so if that bothers you, I’d skip this one. The lack of editing almost made it feel like fan fiction. The pacing of the novel was a bit odd; the ending felt rushed compared to the beginning. It was entertaining and a fun read but nothing to write home about.

Literally makes Stephanie Meyers writing look Stephen Hawking. Use of repetative phrasing is annoying ( and a turn off) , the English language has so many lovely hyperbolic words and different phrases that can make books like this more imaginative and exciting but no, this author uses the language of a 14 year old boy (insert Beevis and Butt head laugh and it's there).

I do appreciate this is just suppose to be a very base level, get the job done version of "Mills & Boon" with extra smut, but it had the potential to be more.

I started reading this on Facebook and was immediately hooked. I needed to know what happened next so I downloaded the Dreame app. I ended up finishing all 60 chapters in one day! It was a really easy read and stays interesting throughout. There’s quite a few typos that need editing but generally it’s a really good storyline and I really enjoyed it. 5/5 from me (even if it did cost me 5 x £2.99 to keep unlocking the chapters!)

This book was okay. Really they are way too many typos and the author constantly switches POV and it is really distracting. Definitely written by someone with no editing or possibly feedback before putting it out there. Overall the plot is intriguing to want to read. Then with the development of the story, it just leaves you not satisfied. The foursome relationship is way to overbearing and the men treat the female like a child. It is very annoying. There is so much time spent in the beginning trying to get to them to be a foursome, then it just rushes and a bunch of things with no development. If you do not care about what you are reading of think about anything to do with books when reading, then you might enjoy it. Otherwise, just skip it.

I only read the first 9 chapters (for free) I genuinely couldn’t put it down I loved it. I think my opinion may not be the full scope because of that. I agree with the other reviews noting for proofreading ect. But I genuinely enjoyed it and wanted to know what happened next. Werewolf love circle is the baseline. I had the actors who played twilight werewolves as the face to some of the werewolves in this book. Not a bad read, I recommend trying the first few chapters to see how you like it.

This book came up as a Facebook ad and I was intrigued enough to download the Dreame App, I got to chapter 16, which is where Chasity loses her virginity and starts calling Felix ‘Daddy’ (cringe 🥴)
I couldn’t read further without paying for coins and with 155 chapters that would cost me over $30 to read a book with a lot of spelling errors. You can buy it on Amazon for $16 for a paperback, but I prefer electronic books so this is where I will have to stop reading

This book had the potential to be a great book. There were many things that prevented it from being so, such as many spelling errors as well as overused words. There was times where it felt very immature and repetitive and times that it felt exciting. The inconsistency of it all was tiring. I still finished the book but the ending was rushed and seemed like there could have been much more to the story.